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Shine Bright, Little Star

Hossam Zakaria

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Shine Bright, Little Star

by Hossam Zakaria · Watercolor · Ages 6–9 · 10 pages

The evening constellations flickered their practice rhythm—blink, pause, glow—and in the center of it all, a young star pulsed along, counting her own light like a child counting sheep. She'd been at it for hours. The whole sky waited, breathless, for her to shine for real.

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The evening constellations flickered their practice rhythm—blink, pause, glow—and in the center of it all, a young star pulsed along, counting her own light like a child counting sheep. She'd been at it for hours. The whole sky waited, breathless, for her to shine for real.

Then—darkness. Her glow cut off mid-blink, and the constellations around her faltered. She reached a small tendril of light toward her own edge and poked. Nothing glowed back. She poked again, harder. Still nothing at all. Not yet, she thought, pressing her dim tip against her own edge. Not tonight.

A lavender cloud spiraled down like a slow swirl of cotton candy and caught her gently under her whole soft body. She sank through it, slow and dim, drifting toward the aurora ribbons stitched between two distant planets. Below, the ribbons glowed pale green and violet, patient as a held breath.

Layers of lavender cloud stretched in every direction, curling and uncurling like the folds of a vast blanket. Somewhere deep in the haze, a single thread of gold caught the light—thin, trembling. The clouds swirled around it, hiding it, showing it, hiding it again.

She followed the gold thread and found it: a small crescent moon huddled against the curve of a grey planet, its glow stuttering like a match struck in wind. The crescent's thin light flickered, caught, flickered again. Lumi stopped drifting. She tilted toward it, her dim form angling closer. Oh, she thought. You're doing it too.

Lumi wrapped herself around the small crescent and hummed—a low, round note that rattled the cloud particles into a soft vibration. She hummed until the stutter slowed to a steady pulse. When she pulled away, a pinprick of gold bloomed at her dim tip. The crescent wobbled, then waved with one thin, crooked arm.

Deeper in the sky, the clouds thinned and the dark opened wide. A tiny comet was tangled in the folds of a great black nebula, its tail sparking and fraying against the cold matter, whipping little bursts of blue. It couldn't get free. Lumi drifted closer, her single gold pinprick the only warm light in the whole vast dark.

Lumi set her teeth—tiny points of solid light—and bit through the tangled strands one by one. Chomp. Chomp. Chomp. Silver scratches dragged across the black where her teeth bit through. The comet whipped free in a dizzying loop and slapped a smudge of electric blue straight across her face. She blinked. Oops, she thought.

The nebula groaned in the still air, its black edges curling and cracking like scorched paper. Lumi pressed her whole dim body against its cold surface and whispered, 'You're okay.' The nebula shuddered. Then—SHOOOONK—it sneezed, a rolling, thunderous blast that hurled a tidal wave of glittering dust across the entire sky. It piled onto her like the first snowfall of a new world.

Underneath the glittering dust, she was blazing—hot, steady, unwavering. The aurora ribbons flared pink and stretched wide to frame her as she rose, trailing threads of gold and blue. The small crescent waved. The comet looped past. She held still at the very top of the constellations, and the stars around her leaned in, brighter than before.